Tuesday, August 17, 2010

A lost love

Soulmates- they were,
He came into her life as a breath of fresh air.
It was the start of a carefree affair.
Their love was deep, like a deep blue sea.
But soon the tides turned and one could see.
Their love was not meant to be.
He stayed aloof,
Saying it was for her own good.
He cared, but he never dared.
He did it for her, that's what he said.
Was it true? Or was he through?
What was the reason he let her depart?
No exchange of words, not a single touch.
Just a mere good bye
And souls were torn apart.

3 comments:

सूफ़ी आशीष/ ਸੂਫ਼ੀ ਆਸ਼ੀਸ਼ said...

I mean....... How do you know what transpired?!?!?!
Beautifully encapsulated!

The love was meant to be.....
Its alive in their hearts!!!
Souls are still together.....
Bodies far apart!!!

God bless ya!

niyati said...

ashish

hi.thanks for the comment. loved ur interpretation..bcoz that's what we all want to believe.
wo kehte hai na
Humko malum hai jannat ki haqeeqat lekin .... Dil ke khush rakhne ko Ghalib ye khayaal achha hai...

aap bahut hi achha likhte hain. hanste hue bhi sochne par majboor karte hain.

सूफ़ी आशीष/ ਸੂਫ਼ੀ ਆਸ਼ੀਸ਼ said...

"ऐ रफ़ीक रक़ाबत अच्छी नहीं एहतराम करने वालों से,
के दर्द हमें भी होता है, ये बात और है के शाद रहते हैं!!!"
रफ़ीक: फ्रैंड
रकाबत: लड़ाई, कम्पीटीशन
एहतराम: रेस्पेक्ट
शाद: हैप्पी
"ज़िंदगी को सीर्यसली नहीं सिंसिअर्ली लीजिये...... खुश रहिये!"
अपना तो यही फंडा है!!!
आशीष